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Education:In some cultures, c...

Education: In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Cambridge IELTS 15 Step 1. Identify the promptType: pros and cons Task: present both perspectives, better take a clear stanceStep 2. Highlight theme words & question wordsTheme words: children, achievement Question words: achieve anything if try hard Step 3. Compare reasons and pick a stronger sideAdvantages: ambition, motivation, confidence, a growth mindset, persistence, resilienceDisadvantages: unrealistic expectations, pressure, stress and burnout; overlooking other factors, such as opportunities, privilege, or innate talentStep 4. Choosing a positionAcknowledging both sides but ultimately feel that it must be balanced with the recognition of limitations and external factorsOutline Paragraph 1: IntroductionParaphrase the topic.Advantages: builds resilience, inspires ambitionDisadvantages: unrealistic expectations, create pressure, and overlook other factors Position: While encouraging effort is important, this message should be balancedParagraph 2: Concession ParagraphAcknowledge potential advantages, e.g. many successful individuals attribute their achievements to persistence and effort, often citing the importance of never giving up. Paragraph 3: Main Body Unrealistic expectations: not all goals are achievable, lead to frustration, e.g. a child who dreams of becoming a world-class athlete but lacks the necessary physical traits might feel discouraged. Pressure and stress, e.g. may experience stress, affect mental healthOverlooking external factors, such as privilege, opportunity, and innate talent play in success, e.g. children from disadvantaged backgrounds may struggle moreParagraph 4: ConclusionRestating position: While it is important to motivate children to work hard, this message should be balanced with the understanding that external factors and limitations exist, ensuring that children can pursue their goals while being aware of their personal and external circumstances.海归湾根据官方六大话题、五种题型、最新《剑桥雅思》和机经真题，请ChatGPT写了30篇范文，经雅思写作老师、前加拿大雅思考官校对，现已上架海归湾雅思部微信视频号小店，早入。想领PDF版范文的宝宝，加微 451925814 或 18612530608，留言：30

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