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Government Spending: In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Cambridge IELTS 12Step 1. Identify the promptType: discussion essay Task: compare arguments for building new railways vs. improving current transport; state clear stanceStep 2. Highlight theme words & question words Theme Words: new railway lines, fast trains, existing public transport, money Question Words: necessary ( View A: pro-new railways ) , should be spent on improving ( View B: pro-existing transport )  View A: invest in new high-speed railwaysView B: prioritize upgrades to current transport systems Step 3. Compare reasons and pick a stronger side  Arguments for View A Faster intercity travel boosts economic connectivityReduces road / air traffic congestion and carbon emissionsSymbolizes technological progress and national prestigeArguments for View B Directly benefits daily commuters ( e.g., buses, metros )Cost-effective: repairs / upgrades cheaper than new infrastructureAddresses urgent urban issues ( e.g., overcrowding, delays )Step 4. Choosing a positionImproving existing transport is more urgent and equitable, but high-speed railways have long-term strategic value. Balance is ideal, but prioritize current systems.  OutlineParagraph 1: Introduction Paraphrase topic: funding for new railways vs. existing transport  View A: High-speed trains enhance connectivity and sustainability. View B: Existing systems need upgrades to serve daily needs. Position: Support View B, but acknowledge View A’s merits. Paragraph 2: Concession Paragraph Arguments for View A Economic benefits: Faster trains link cities, promoting trade and tourism. Environmental edge: reduces reliance on cars / planes. National image: Modern infrastructure attract global attention. Paragraph 3: Main Body Arguments for View BImmediate impact: Upgrades improve daily life for urban populations ( e.g., reliability, accessibility )Cost efficiency: Fixing existing networks avoids wasteful spending. Equity: Prioritizes low-income commuters dependent on public transport. Paragraph 4: Personal Stance Support View B: Current systems need urgent attention to address inequality and inefficiency. Balance: Allocate some funds to rail research but focus on fixing metros/buses first. Paragraph 5: Conclusion  Summary: New railways vs. current transport upgradesRestate position: Prioritize existing systems for broader societal benefit. Final thought: Governments should adopt hybrid strategies but prioritize daily commuter needs. 海归湾根据官方六大话题、五种题型、最新《剑桥雅思》和机经真题，请ChatGPT写了30篇范文，经雅思写作老师、前加拿大雅思考官校对，现已上架海归湾雅思部微信视频号小店，早入。想领PDF版范文的宝宝，加微 451925814 或 18612530608，留言：30

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