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Health：Many manufactured food...

Health：Many manufactured food and drink contains high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? - Cambridge IELTS 16Step 1: Identify the promptDo you agree or disagree that sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar? Opinion question Step 2: Highlight theme words and question wordsTheme words: health problems, sugary productsQuestion words: should, more expensiveStep 3: SpecifySugary products: soft drinks, candy, desserts, processed snacks Health problems: obesity, diabetes, heart disease, tooth decay Making sugary products expensive: higher taxes, increased retail prices, economic disincentives Alternative solutions: education on healthy eating, promoting sugar-free substitutes, stricter regulations on advertising Step 4: Take a stance20% disagreement: Raising prices alone may not significantly reduce sugar consumption. Example: People may continue to buy sugary products despite higher prices due to addiction or lack of affordable alternatives. 80% agreement: Making sugary products more expensive is an effective way to reduce sugar consumption. Examples: Higher prices discourage excessive consumption, especially among low-income groups. Taxes on sugary products can fund public health campaigns and medical treatments. Outline  Paragraph 1 IntroductionParaphrase the topic. State your position: While raising prices on sugary products may not completely solve the problem, it is a necessary step to reduce sugar consumption and improve public health. Paragraph 2 Concession Paragraph20% disagreementRaising prices alone may not significantly reduce sugar consumption.Example: People addicted to sugar or unaware of its health risks may continue to purchase sugary products despite higher costs. Example: Without affordable and appealing alternatives, higher prices might not lead to healthier choices. Paragraph 3 Main Body 180% agreementHigher prices discourage excessive consumption.Economic disincentives, such as sugar taxes, make sugary products less accessible, particularly for low-income groups. Example: In Mexico, a sugar tax led to a significant reduction in soda consumption and improved public health outcomes. Paragraph 4 Main Body 280% agreement Taxes on sugary products can fund public health initiatives.Example: Countries like the UK use sugar tax revenue to fund school programs promoting healthy lifestyles. Higher prices can also encourage manufacturers to produce healthier, low-sugar alternatives. Paragraph 5 ConclusionSummarize the argument. Restate the thesis: While raising prices on sugary products may not be a standalone solution, it is an effective measure to reduce sugar consumption and improve public health when combined with education and alternative options.注：海归湾根据官方六大话题、五种题型、最新《剑桥雅思》和机经真题，请ChatGPT写了30篇范文，经雅思写作老师、前加拿大雅思考官校对，现已上架海归湾雅思部微信视频号小店，早入。想领PDF版范文的宝宝，加微 451925814 或 18612530608，留言：30

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