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Environment: Many people say ...

Environment: Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.Step 1: Identify the promptTo what extent do you agree or disagree? Opinion question.Step 2: Highlight theme words and question wordsTheme words: globalization, multinational companies, environment Question words: negativeStep 3: SpecifyGlobalization: increased international trade, global supply chains, cultural exchange Multinational companies: large corporations operating in multiple countries ( e.g. Amazon, Coca-Cola ) Negative effects on the environment: deforestation, pollution, carbon emissions, overuse of resources Positive contributions: investment in renewable energy, corporate social responsibility ( CSR ), green technology Step 4: Take a stance20% disagreement: Globalization and multinational companies can contribute positively to environmental protection. Example: Many multinational companies invest in green technologies and promote sustainability initiatives. 80% agreement: Globalization and multinational companies have significant negative effects on the environment. Examples: Increased pollution and carbon emissions from global supply chains and transportation. Deforestation and resource exploitation to meet the demands of global markets. Outline  Paragraph 1 IntroductionParaphrase the topic. State your position: While globalization and multinational companies can contribute to environmental solutions, their overall impact on the environment is predominantly negative due to pollution, resource exploitation, and carbon emissions. Paragraph 2 Concession Paragraph20% disagreementGlobalization and multinational companies can play a positive role in environmental protection.Example: Some multinational corporations, such as Tesla, invest heavily in renewable energy and green technology. Example: Globalization facilitates the sharing of environmentally friendly practices and technologies across nations. Paragraph 3 Main Body 180% agreementGlobalization and multinational companies increase pollution and carbon emissions.The transportation of goods across countries leads to significant greenhouse gas emissions. Example: The global shipping industry is a major contributor to air and water pollution. Factories set up by multinational companies often operate in countries with weaker environmental regulations, leading to higher levels of pollution. Paragraph 4 Main Body 280% agreementGlobalization drives resource exploitation and deforestation.To meet the demands of global markets, forests are cleared for agriculture, mining, and infrastructure development. Example: The expansion of palm oil plantations, driven by global demand, has caused massive deforestation in Indonesia and Malaysia. Multinational companies often prioritize profit over sustainability, leading to overuse of natural resources. Paragraph 5 ConclusionSummarize the argument. Restate the thesis: While globalization and multinational companies can support environmental protection through green initiatives, their overall impact is largely negative due to pollution, carbon emissions, and resource exploitation. Efforts to mitigate these effects require stricter regulations and a global commitment to sustainability.注：海归湾根据官方六大话题、五种题型、最新《剑桥雅思》和机经真题，请ChatGPT写了30篇范文，经雅思写作老师、前加拿大雅思考官校对，现已上架海归湾雅思部微信视频号小店，早入。想领PDF版范文的宝宝，加微 451925814 或 18612530608，留言：30

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