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01PTE写作评分标准PTE写作主要考察:逻辑连贯、词汇丰富度、语法准确性和拼写格式。逻辑连贯?段落结构清晰:开头段:背景句(如“It is generally true that…”)+ 明确观点(如“While…, I believe…”)。让步段:承认对方观点合理性(“It has to be admitted that…”)+ 解释+举例。自己观点段:反驳(“On the other hand…”)+ 举例+结论。结尾段:重申立场+建议(“It is well-advised that…”)。?连接词运用:段间:However, On the other hand, Admittedly…句间:This means that…, As a result…, For example…真题示例(教育类)题目:Successful sports stars are role models for youngsters. Do you agree?让步段:It has to be admitted that stars like Kobe Bryant inspire perseverance. This is because they undergo rigorous training. For example, his work ethic motivates fans. This certainly means young people may emulate their dedication.

词汇丰富? 低分表达:study abroad → study abroad → study abroad…? 高分替换:overseas education / international studies / further studies abroad固定搭配加分:exert positive influence(施加积极影响)address social issues(解决社会问题)instill wrong values(灌输错误价值观)语法复杂度? PTE高分范文的句子比例:50%复杂句(含从句,如Although…, …)30%并列句(Not only…, but also…)20%简单句(用于强调观点)? 经典复杂句结构:主语从句: What matters most is…让步状语从句: Although technology brings convenience, it also causes isolation.虚拟语气: It is advised that governments should take action.格式与拼写字数: 65分目标240词,79分目标280词。拼写: 错2个扣1分,务必关闭自动纠错!书面语: 避免缩写(can’t→cannot)、口语化表达(kids→children)。02范文(资料摘选)2024年10月真题题目:Some believe that teachers can be replaced by the Internet. Do you agree?

高分范文结构:(1)开头段:背景句:It is generally true that online learning offers flexibility.观点句:While the Internet facilitates education, I believe teachers remain irreplaceable.(2)让步段(承认网络教育优势):观点句:It has to be admitted that the Internet allows self-paced learning.举例:For example, students can avoid commuting and save time.结果:This certainly improves efficiency.(3)反驳段(教师不可替代):观点句:However, teachers motivate students and provide discipline.举例:As an illustration, unruly students need guidance to focus.结论:As a result, classrooms foster better interaction.(4)结尾段:重申观点:In conclusion, although the Internet aids learning, teachers play a unique role.建议:It is advised that schools integrate technology without replacing teachers.03避坑指南常见错误1:逻辑跳跃? 低分写法:Online learning is good. Teachers are important.(无因果链接)? 高分写法:Although online learning is efficient, teachers provide irreplaceable mentorship.常见错误2:词汇重复? 低分写法:The Internet is useful. The Internet is convenient.? 高分写法:The Internet enhances accessibility, while also offering flexibility.常见错误3:语法单一? 低分写法:Students like online courses. They save time.? 高分写法:Students prefer online courses because they eliminate commuting time.04PTE资料展示

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