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题目回顾&题目分析题目:The table below shows the number of five kinds of registered vehicles in Australia in 2010 and 2015
审题思路:表格展示了澳大利亚2010年和2015年五种注册车辆的数量变化,包括具体数据及增长百分比。需重点关注:(1)数据对比:2010 vs 2015的数值差异。(2)变化趋势:增长幅度(百分比)的差异。(3)显著特征:*大值、最小值、增长*快/*慢的车型。(4)关键数据:所有车辆数量均增长,但增幅差异大。增长*快的是摩托车(200%),*慢的是SUV(13%)。轿车数量*多,2010年占42%(1.58M/3.73M),2015年占47%(2.5M/5.35M)。卡车和货车数量居中,SUV数量较少但基数较大。总量增长43%,说明车辆注册数整体上升。??找小星咨询语言培训的方式如下??长按下方???二维码图 或搜索微信号xingchenxiaoliu55(星辰小刘55)
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写作结构建议(1)开头段(Introduction)① 改写题目:说明表格内容,避免直接复制题目。② 示例:The table illustrates the changes in the number of five different types of registered vehicles in Australia in 2010 and 2015, along with their respective percentage increases.(2)概述段(Overview)① 总结主要趋势(不写具体数据):所有车辆数量均增加,但摩托车增长*快(200%),SUV增长*慢(13%)。轿车数量*多,且对总量贡献*大。卡车和货车增长较平缓(20%-40%)。② 示例:Overall, the number of all vehicle types increased, with motors showing the most dramatic rise (200%), while SUVs had the smallest growth (13%). Cars remained the most common vehicles in both years, significantly impacting the total figures.(3)细节段1(Details 1)① 描述高增长的车型(motors,cars)Motors基数最小(150K→450K),但增幅*大(200%)。Cars数量*多(1.58M→2.5M),增长58%,对总量影响*大。② 示例:In 2010, cars dominated with 1.58 million registrations, which rose by 58% to 2.5 million in 2015. By contrast, motors, despite having the lowest initial number (150,000), experienced a threefold increase to 450,000, making it the fastest-growing category.(4)细节段2(Details 2)① 描述低增长车型(vans,trucks,SUVs)Vans增长40%(250K→350K),trucks增长20%(1M→1.2M)。SUVs增长*慢(13%),仅从750K增至850K。② 总结总量变化(3.73M→5.35M,+43%)③ 示例:Vans and trucks showed moderate growth, increasing by 40% (250,000 to 350,000) and 20% (1 million to 1.2 million) respectively. Meanwhile, SUVs had the smallest rise, from 750,000 to 850,000 (13%). Overall, total vehicle registrations climbed from 3.73 million to 5.35 million, a 43% increase.
写作词汇积累描述变化的词汇增长减少平稳/波动increasedecreaseremain stablerisedeclinefluctuategrowdropstay constantsurgefallstabilizesoarreducelittle changejumpshrinkminimal growth描述幅度的词汇大幅增长小幅增长急剧变化dramatic riseslight increasesharp growthsignificant growthmodest riserapid surgesubstantial increasemarginal growthsteep climbthreefold increaseminimal changesudden jump比较句型【转折对比句型】① 结构:While/Whereas X [趋势], Y [相反趋势]Although X [数据], Y [对比数据]② 使用场景:当两组数据呈现明显反差时(如一个增长快,一个增长慢)。③ 例句:While car registrations surged by 58%, SUVs saw only a marginal increase of 13%.Whereas motors tripled in number, trucks grew by a modest 20%.【倍数/差距强调句型】① 结构:X [变化], [倍数] times higher than YX [数据], [数字] times as many/much as Y② 使用场景:需要突出数据间的倍数关系或巨大差距时。③ 例句:Motors increased by 200%, three times faster than vans (40%).In 2015, there were twice as many cars as trucks.【让步对比句型】① 结构:Despite [X的劣势/基数], X [显著趋势]Even though X [初始状态], it [突出变化]② 使用场景:强调某数据在基数小/条件不利的情况下仍表现突出。③ 例句:Despite having the lowest initial figures, motors recorded the steepest rise.Even though SUVs started with 750,000 units, their growth was minimal.
高分范文The table illustrates the changes in the number of five different types of registered vehicles in Australia between 2010 and 2015, along with their respective percentage increases.Overall, all vehicle categories saw an increase in registrations, with motors exhibiting the most dramatic rise (200%), while SUVs had the smallest growth (13%). Cars remained the most common vehicles in both years, significantly contributing to the total figures.In detail, cars dominated in 2010 with 1.58 million registrations, which surged by 58% to 2.5 million in 2015. In contrast, motors, despite having the lowest initial number (150,000), experienced a threefold increase to 450,000, making it the fastest-growing category.Meanwhile, vans and trucks showed moderate growth, rising by 40% (250,000 to 350,000) and 20% (1 million to 1.2 million) respectively. SUVs, however, had the smallest increase, climbing only 13% from 750,000 to 850,000. Overall, total vehicle registrations increased from 3.73 million to 5.35 million, a 43% rise over the five-year period.(Word count: 170)
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