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小星老师,我报名了六月份的雅思考试,你能帮我分析一下5.24的写作真题吗?
当然可以了!这次雅思真题写作:含有暴力的电影和电脑游戏很受欢迎。有人说它们对社会有负面影响,应该被禁止。其他人说它们只是无害的放松。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。
今天我会在这篇文章中构思如何去写,并附上3-5月的雅思写作真题合集,里面包含了高分范文,可以多记多背,找出写作逻辑。
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文末有领取方式哦~免费领取,不收取任何费用! 01题目展示&观点拆解1题目展示Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have a negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 含有暴力的电影和电脑游戏很受欢迎。有人说它们对社会有负面影响,应该被禁止。其他人说它们只是无害的放松。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。2观点拆解审题思路:这道题讨论的是在暴力的电影和电脑游戏是否会对社会产生负面影响。(1)观点一:暴力的电影和电脑游戏内容对社会存在负面影响,应被禁止。(2)观点二:暴力的电影和电脑游戏内容是无害的放松方式,不应该被禁止。要求:讨论这两种观点,并给出自己的看法。题目关键词:1.Violence in films and computer games(影视与电子游戏中的暴力内容)2.Negative effect on society(对社会有负面影响)3.Harmless relaxation(无害的放松方式)讨论重点:利用辩证思维来平衡监管与自由,强化应该去正确引导而非禁止。可能存在的立场:? 禁止派? 完全支持派?? 辩证平衡派 02写作结构建议开头段:引入话题+表明立场主体段 1:讨论 “禁止派” 观点 + 反驳主体段 2:支持 “无害娱乐派” 观点主题段3:自己的观点(折中观点)结尾段:总结立场 + 升华 03高分范文【开头段】:概括争议→承认危害存在→反对全面禁止→点出娱乐价值People hold divergent views on whether films and computer games containing violence should be banned. While I acknowledge that such media may exert negative impacts if misused, a total ban is unreasonable, as they provide a safe and pleasurable way of relaxation for many. 人们对含有暴力内容的电影和电子游戏是否应该被禁持不同观点。尽管我承认此类媒体若被滥用可能会产生负面影响,但全面禁止是不合理的,因为它们为许多人提供了一种安全且愉悦的放松方式。【主体段1】:陈述青少年模仿的危害Those in favor of the ban mainly worry about the potential harm to teenagers, who are particularly susceptible to violent scenes. Children often imitate the behaviors of heroes in movies without fully understanding the underlying consequences. This imitation of violent actions and fight scenes may enhance aggressiveness, distort worldviews, and negatively affect behavior. However, I contend that an outright ban on violent content is not the best solution. 支持禁止的人主要担心其对青少年的潜在危害,青少年尤其容易受暴力场景的影响。孩子们常常模仿电影中英雄的行为,却没有完全理解其背后的后果。这种对暴力行为和打斗场景的模仿可能会增强攻击性、扭曲世界观,并对行为产生负面影响。然而,我认为彻底禁止暴力内容并非*佳解决方案。【主题段2】:提出分级制 + 家长的监管替代方案Implementing strict rating systems is more conducive to restricting minors" access to inappropriate content. Moreover, parental supervision and guidance are of vital importance, as they can help children rationally understand these violent depictions and establish correct values of right and wrong. 实施严格的分级制度更有助于限制未成年人接触不合适的内容。此外,父母的监督和引导至关重要,因为它们可以帮助孩子理性理解这些暴力刻画,并树立正确的是非价值观。【主题段3】:成年人区分虚构与现实→减压功能→艺术价值(举例论证)On the other hand, the argument that violent films and games are harmless entertainment is also convincing. Most adults can clearly distinguish between fictional violence and real life, regarding horror movies or action games as recreational activities to effectively relieve stress after a busy day. In this fast-paced society, such virtual experiences provide people with a controllable way to decompress, which is beneficial to mental health. It is worth noting that many films with intense fighting scenes are recognized as artworks. For example, Chinese traditional kung fu films and war movies often present bloody violence, and these elements can not only enhance the viewing experience but also improve the artistic expressiveness and narrative depth of the works.另一方面,“暴力电影和游戏是无害娱乐” 这一论点也具有说服力。大多数成年人能够清晰区分虚构暴力与现实生活,将恐怖电影或动作游戏视为忙碌一天后有效缓解压力的娱乐活动。在这个快节奏的社会中,此类虚拟体验为人们提供了一种可控的解压方式,有益于心理健康。值得注意的是,许多包含激烈打斗场景的电影被公认为艺术作品。例如,中国传统功夫片和战争电影常常呈现血腥暴力,这些元素不仅能增强观影体验,还能提升作品的艺术表现力和叙事深度。【结尾段】:重申反对全面禁止→强调分级监管的合理性To sum up, although concerns about the influence of violent media are understandable, a comprehensive ban is neither realistic nor necessary. Through reasonable age restrictions and responsible regulation, violent films and computer games can continue to provide entertainment value without endangering social well-being.综上所述,尽管对暴力媒体影响的担忧可以理解,但全面禁止既不现实也无必要。通过合理的年龄限制和负责任的监管,暴力电影和电子游戏可以继续提供娱乐价值,同时不危及社会福祉。 04亮点词汇1观点表达类 hold divergent views - 持有不同观点contend that... - 主张 / 认为...acknowledge that... - 承认...be of the opinion that... - 认为...2利弊分析类exert negative impacts - 产生负面影响be susceptible to... - 易受... 影响distort worldviews - 扭曲世界观enhance aggressiveness - 增强攻击性relieve stress / decompress - 缓解压力be beneficial to mental health - 有益于心理健康3解决方案类implement strict rating systems - 实施严格分级制度restrict access to... - 限制接触...parental supervision and guidance - 家长监督与引导age restrictions and regulation - 年龄限制与监管4 逻辑连接类 while / although - 尽管however - 然而moreover / furthermore - 此外on the other hand - 另一方面to sum up / in conclusion - 综上所述5 学术词汇类fictional violence - 虚构暴力artistic expressiveness - 艺术表现力narrative depth - 叙事深度social well-being - 社会福祉minors / adolescents - 未成年人6 高频动词搭配imitate behaviors - 模仿行为distinguish between A and B - 区分 A 与 Bregard...as... -将... 视为...endanger social well-being - 危害社会福祉provide entertainment value - 提供娱乐价值PDF预览
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