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Task1小作文建议用时 20 分钟，需快速提取关键数据，避免过度细节化。折线图2024年出现7次，占数据类图表的21.9%，侧重趋势变化（如上升、下降、波动）。

Introduction and overview:The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the 6-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.Remember:You just need one sentence for the introduction, and you can write it by paraphrasing the question statement (rewrite it in your own words). Try to write two sentences for your overview paragraph; in this case we can describe one main feature of each graph.引言段只需一句话，可通过改写题目内容完成（用自己的话重新表达）。概述段建议写两句话；在本例中，我们可以分别描述每幅图表的一个主要特征。饼图2024 年上半年出现3次，全年占比约10%，常考查占比关系（部分与整体的比例）。

The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.饼状图对比了 2005 年和 2010 年游客对 Parkway 酒店客户服务的调查反馈。It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good orexcellent in 2010.显然，从 2005 年到 2010 年，客户总体满意度显著提升。2005 年大多数酒店客人将客户服务评价为 “满意” 或 “差”，而 2010 年绝大多数人认为酒店服务 “好” 或 “极好”。Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010.Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.先来看积极反馈：2005 年仅有 5% 的游客认为客户服务 “极好”，但这一数字在 2010 年上升至 28%。此外，2005 年仅有 14% 的客人评价服务 “好”，五年后给出这一评价的人数几乎是原来的三倍。 With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010.Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. 关于负面反馈，认为酒店客户服务 “差” 的客人比例从 2005 年的 21% 降至 2010 年的 12%。同样，认为服务 “非常差” 的比例在五年间从 15% 降至 4%。Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.最后，2010 年 “满意” 评价的减少反映了当年更多人对调查给出了积极反馈这一事实。柱形图2024年出现12次，占数据类图表的37.5%，常与时间或类别结合考查动态对比。

The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.（图表展示了）英国 10 至 15 岁青少年参与两项活动的情况，即网上聊天和玩电脑游戏。Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the Internet. However, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls.总体而言，玩电脑游戏的受欢迎程度略高于网上聊天。然而，如果我们观察男女的具体数据，会发现完全不同的趋势。Boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online. According to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. Furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this activity for four hours or more.By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.相比之下，女孩更喜欢网上聊天。在 10 至 15 岁的女孩中，近 70% 每天参与网上聊天，而玩电脑游戏的这一群体比例约为 50%。在玩游戏机的女孩中，大多数每天玩不到一小时，而大多数上网聊天的女孩每天聊天超过一小时，近 10% 的女孩聊天四小时或更久。Note:I decided to write about boys in one paragraph and girls in the other.However, it would also be fine to write paragraphs about chatting on theInternet and playing on consoles.我决定在一个段落中讨论男孩的情况，另一个段落讨论女孩的情况。不过，若按 “网上聊天” 和 “玩游戏机” 这两项活动分别写段落，也是可行的。表格2024年出现10次，占数据类图表的31.2%，数据密集需提炼关键极值或分组规律。

The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.该图表对比了 1980 年、1990 年和 2000 年六个国家的垃圾产生量。In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan,Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.在这三年中，美国的垃圾产生量均超过爱尔兰、日本、韩国、波兰和葡萄牙的总和。值得注意的是，韩国是在 2000 年成功减少垃圾排放量的国家。Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes,while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.1980 年至 2000 年间，美国的垃圾产量从 1.31 亿吨增至 1.92 亿吨，日本、波兰和葡萄牙也呈现增长趋势。日本的垃圾产量从 2800 万吨增至 5300 万吨，而波兰和葡萄牙的垃圾总量分别从 400 万吨增至 660 万吨，以及从 200 万吨增至 500 万吨。The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.爱尔兰和韩国的趋势与上述国家明显不同。在爱尔兰，垃圾产量增长了八倍多，从 1980 年的 60 万吨增至 2000 年的 500 万吨。相比之下，韩国在 1990 年至 2000 年间将垃圾排放量减少了 1200 万吨。PDF部分预览

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