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雅思大作文7分范文及解析：广泛学习和深入学习

作者：小朗来源：朗阁教育 2020/8/17 9:39:29

针对想要学习雅思的学子们，这一次石家庄朗阁给学子们提供了免费的雅思写作范文，想要看看范文详情吗？赶紧来看看吧。

Some people think that older schoolchildren should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge, while other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in detail. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

题目大意

一些人认为学生应该学习各种各样的科目增加知识，但其他人认为他们应该深入学习较少科目。讨论双方给出你自己的观点。

写作思路解析

➡️论述类分别论证各自观点的合理性，个人观点可以同意其中一方给出不同理由或双方观点结合。思路构思方面可以从old schoolchildren 特点考虑，学生阶段未必知道未来喜欢或从事哪一行业，广泛学习可以帮助学生发现自己的兴趣点，也可以从 a wide range of subjects考虑，这些科目包括文化课及艺术音乐体育等，可以帮助学生提高综合素质；而学的少，平均每科分配时间更多，学的更精

提纲梳理见下

高分写作示范

It is sometimes argued that senior school children can study a number of subjects and gain knowledge. I believe that children should receive a rounded education, instead of focusing on several subjects only.

Some people support a broad general education because children can develop a variety of qualities which contribute to their future success. If these children have to study various subjects at a time, they can develop time management skills gradually. They also improve the ability to work in teams when producing works of art with peers in arts classes and doing group sports in PE. These skills and abilities are important to them when they continue their studies or handle problems of adult life. In contrast, it might be difficult for them to acquire such skills, if they study some core subjects such as maths only.

On the other hand, students may be more likely to achieve success, if they focus their minds on several subjects only. They do not have to devote time to attending different courses, doing homework of different subjects and preparing for numerous exams. For example, students who intend to practice medicine in the future may spend more time on chemistry, while those who prefer to find employment in engineering can pay closer attention to maths and physics. They can develop expertise and earn higher salaries. In contrast, those who study a great variety of subjects might end up doing some low-paid entry-level jobs.

In my view, studying different subjects is a better option, allowing students to choose their career path more easily. They are not aware of their talents and strengths from an early age, and the experience in different disciplines can help them choose some subjects on which they can spend their whole working lives until they can achieve potential. Some students might not realise that they have artistic talents and can pursue a profession in the design industry, if they did not study the arts. So I strongly believe that students should be exposed to different fields of knowledge.