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雅思大作文7分范文及解析：孩子沉迷电玩，缺乏运动

作者：小朗来源：朗阁教育 2020/8/29 10:36:55

石家庄朗阁教育本次给大家分享雅思写作范文，具体是内容是针对孩子沉迷电玩，缺乏运动的知识点，那么下面我们一起来了解一下吧。

Children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports. why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

题目大意

孩子沉迷电玩，缺乏运动。原因是什么？利弊如何？

写作思路解析

题目问的是原因和利弊，文章结构就是逐一回应，一段专门写原因，一段专门写利弊。

题目第二部分问的是是一个积极还是消极的现象，结论可以是单边利＞=＜弊。

审题，找出关键词：spend a lot of time, computer games, little time doing sports，原因要能一一回应到这三个点，什么原因导致长时间接触手机，又为什么是玩游戏，又为何会导致没时间运动；

尤其是在分析利弊时，除了沉迷电话之外，不要忽略little time doing sports所带来的后果；

因为这篇文章要回应的内容较多，在第二段利弊分析时，建议可以单边，要么积极要么消极。

提纲

高分写作示范

One ubiquitous phenomenon today is that many children are obsessed with computer games, and therefore are less likely to engage in physical exercise. While various hypotheses have been proposed to explain the trend, I tend to see the problem as a corollary of their addiction to the digital environment; nevertheless, I am not optimistic about its ramification.

The primary culprit of children’s preoccupation with computer games is the widespread use of portable smart devices. Though there are some exceptions, the majority of youngsters today seem to marry themselves to digital gadgets - wherever they go, they opt to carry smartphones with them, which exposes them to the digital environment at almost all times. To complicate matters even more, a large number of smartphones and tablets are pre-installed with gaming software as a marketing gimmick aimed at the young demographic. Both factors deprive children’s leisure time – enticing them from playgrounds to the virtual world.

While youngsters may argue in favor of video games with reasons such as games stimulating creativity or enhancing problem solving skills, it is difficult for me to see their leisure preference as anything other than a health threat. Long hours of exposure to digital settings exacerbates the sedentary lifestyle of the younger generation, which inevitably increases the tendency toward obesity among youngsters. Another detriment is the impact on their interpersonal skills. We should not forget that outdoor sport provides important opportunities for face-to-face communication and cooperation; unfortunately, this collective activity is gradually being encroached upon by virtual games that isolate young minds.

I would conclude therefore, though children’s addiction to computer games is a concomitant consequence of the digital age, I would say it is imperative that more attention should be directed toward having children understand that importance of balance in leisure activities between sedentary and active pursuits.