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雅思大作文7分范文及解析：上大学之前休学一年去旅游或工作

作者：小朗来源：朗阁教育 2020/9/9 14:04:49

本期石家庄朗阁教育讲师继续给大家分享雅思写作范文，想要了解的小朋友们，赶紧来看看这一次的内容是什么吧，相信可以帮助到你的。

Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

题目大意

有学生选择上大学之前休学一年去旅游或工作。利弊如何？

思路解析

利弊类文章，同样强调在论证上要体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。

在具体利弊的切入点，可以从题目的关键词中寻找线索，这题的关键词包括take one year off, going to university，travel or work，这就暗示了在利弊分析时要结合未来大学学习的目的。

提纲

高分写作示范

Gap years have become increasingly common among high school graduates today. From my perspective, taking a year off for travel or work can be recognized as both positive and negative in equal measure, depending on discrete need of individual student.

From the positive perspective, taking a break from classroom learning provide youngsters with an alternative way to reinvigorate themselves and better prepare for future study. Students who take the opportunity to travel will gain a new and different understanding of the world, as they stretch, grow and see new things, whether these be poverty and hunger in impoverished countries, or the latest scientific achievement in world fairs. All these experiences are conducive to reflection on their future role in the world, helping them choose college majors from a more holistic perspective. The same is true for those choosing to work for a year, who may experience the hardship in the real business world, and therefore start their university careers with ambitions and pragmatic considerations.

However, the benefits mentioned above are not universally applicable to all. One problem can be seen in students from less well-off families. A year-long vacation and travel will inevitably add to financial burden to them – from flights to housing to program fees and food, there are a lot of budget considerations to take into account during a gap year. In response to this, some might argue that a gap year for work can offset the apprehension about money. Unfortunately, I may point out that it might distract some students from returning to campus, particularly when they first taste the first excitement of earning money by working as sales or promotion, which does not require high qualifications or professional skills.

It is my conclusion therefore, gap years can be deemed both advantageous and detrimental, students need to deliberate on their decisions at the great length.