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雅思大作文开头段重述技巧

2024/10/31 15:15:15

雅思作文的开头段写作中要求在保持作文探讨的主题不变的情况下改写原题，如果不改写，不算字数。

而改写大作文题目的最简单的方法之一便是将题目中的信息直接重新表达（paraphrase），考生们可以从以下几个方面入手对雅思题目进行重述。

●某些同义词/词组互换

Example 1:（2023年3月27日考题）

Some people think watching television is bad for children in every way. Others think it is good for the development of children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

is bad for可以换成同义词组has adverse effects on。

is good for可以换成同义词组has beneficial effects on。

Example 2:（2023年2月4日考题）

Organizing tours to remote places and communities is becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment？

becoming more and more popular可以换成同义词组gaining increasing popularity。

这一技巧对考生们的词汇量有要求，如果有的考生词汇储备较小，无法使用该技巧，则可以从语法的角度考虑重述。

●主动语态<=>被动语态

Example:（2023年2月11日考题）

Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

→改写为：Higher salaries should be paid by large companies to CEOs and executives compared to other workers.

●定语<=>定语从句

Example:（2023年12月9日考题）

The leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be better leaders than older people.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

→改写为：The leaders and directors in organizations are often people who are older. But some people say that people who are young can also be better leaders than those who are older.

●状语<=>状语从句

Example:（2023年6月17日考题）

Many ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can we solve this problem?

→改写为：Many ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes even after they are punished for it.

●代词<=>指代内容

Example:（2023年8月19日考题）

Some people think it is more important to spend public money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

→改写为：Some people think to spend public money on roads and motorways is more important than on public transport system such as railways and trams.